Score: 6

"Fat chicks need love too!"

submission: The Fat Anime Collab 3

date: 2 hours ago

Due to the lack of animation and the feeling that this was really more of a slide show then anything else, I couldn't really give it a higher score. I really enjoyed the ending credits techno-dance song.

All in all its a passable series and a well-rounded idea. :3

Score: 7

"Moral of the story: Look before you leap?"

submission: The Fall!

date: August 9, 2008

The animation could use some work. But you knew that.

It was entertaining as hell. The music was a good choice. It had a plot. All in all it was good!

I suggest you work on your artistic talent and eventually remake this once you can convey it in a more visually appealing way. Not bad my friend. Not bad.

Score: 6

"Now I know!"

submission: Abusive Review Guide

date: July 22, 2008

I'm glad you did this. I personally never flagged anything as abusive because I just didn't know what was considered abusive. And I've been on the site for a few years.

So thank you for this. Now make an animation!

Score: 7

"Suggestions"

submission: Really Old Techno Song

date: August 14, 2008

Can use some more gradual buildup. It seems like it hits its peak almost right after the beginning.

Some of the transitions should be faded into and out of. It seems like a great deal of things were thrown into this song and hence it feels really heavy for 2:42 worth of time. This might sound strange, but give it some downtime or quiet time.

Hope my suggestions made at least some sense. Keep it up!

Score: 9

"This just got better and better"

submission: The Two Demons

date: July 7, 2008

The longer I listened to it the more I digged this track. You call it The Two Demons, and in my mind I imagined a flash game based around two demons cooperating to reach the end of the level/achieve the goal. I'm no animator, but I think this track is worthy of being included in a flash. Keep it up!

Score: 9

"Top Quality"

submission: More Than Words (OriginalMix)

date: May 29, 2008

This surpasses most of the trance songs I've heard on Newgrounds in terms of its quality.

It sounds like something you'd hear in any club, or any trance station. I gave it a 9 mostly because its pretty generic trance, but that doesn't mean it isn't good. I think its superb. Keep it up!